- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Immoral Acts
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Click hereExorcism is only right
when young girls writhe
for deliverance in the hands
of oldie beardie manly men
for their immoral acts
in Jesus' name
and the relief that comes
with awkward kisses
on newly enlightened
ankles thighs and forehead
- COMMENTS
PoetGuyabout 13 years agoAs Tristesse2 said, a strange poem. Poet Guy has no clear idea of what the poem is "about," i.e. what the author wants the reader to take away from the poem. The phrase "oldie beardie manly men" seems so intentionally cutesy-quaint that it makes the poem seem as overly done as a Turkish Delight dipped in sugar. Perhaps this is meant to be mocking of the usual Lit BDSM poem?
In any case, some interest but too vague for Poet Guy's limited comprehension. Judged a 4 for at least being out of the ordinary.
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago.....joining in this tussle but will question "oldie beardie". Strange little poem that I've read several times and got no closer to.
Tess
bflagsstabout 13 years agoAuthorI don't understand the question you're asking, 1201. I make a couple comments a year, I get a couple comments a year. I've no interest in being the comment queen of lit poetry. It looks like most of your 52 card pickup group has pulled up stakes and left new poems.
twelveooneabout 13 years agoFirst Sir William, a little elaboration may be in order, i.e. the big why. This looks like one sentence, a complex (in the scene that is has many words) sentence, ergo it must be prose poetry.
Now bflagsst, a little history, I recommend a poem, you jump in and diss it, bad taste or difference of opinion. And since I didn't join your bunky buddy's crusade, because neither one of you wants to leave comments with YOUR NAME attached, you two decided to switch the holy war over to me. You made an issue over the fact I left a pun on a comment, tsk, tsk, I feel soooooooo bad. Well I've been ghosted and I think I've seen one H on any poem, since your less than enthusiastic posting on the "Greatest Poem" ever. I can't prove it, but since I've seen but one comment on one poem from your group, I can honestly say, you haven't helped matters much.
Consider this a test, I haven't pulled that trigger yet, I'm leaving it as an option.
