In Devils Gaze

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Your eyes, so dark, like depth of shadow
Burn so bright and crawl so deep
My breath resides, uncertain flutters
In devil’s gaze, I grant defeat

Time stands still in frozen motion
Shivers trace my needing flesh
You laugh and tease with such devotion
Sculpting palms to wanton breast

Knees so weak, you lay me gently
Seducing me to dusky lair
Enchanting whispers cloud my senses
I gasp and cry in wild despair

The pressure of your fingers, teasing
Friction on my swollen bud
The arch of back, the moans of pleasing
Brings a sudden rush of blood

And oh, so hard, your patience waning
Desperation borne of lust
This sweat, this need, this painful aching
Eased so soon with forceful thrust

Rhythm flows and rhythm dances
Caressing deep within my core
The pleasure of your sweet invasion
Leaves me gasping, needing more

Then eyes so dark, now clouded over
Lost within my twirling gaze
Confessions told with simple fusing
Souls as one, our fates the same

And there in that exquisite moment
Releasing on your boiling shaft
Time stands still and waits in wonder
Delighting in our coitus craft

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TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 17 years ago
Sweet

...surrender to passions untold. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing :)

T_T

tungtied2utungtied2uabout 17 years ago
Your poem has been mentioned

in today's New Poem Reviews. Steamy, sexy poem here...you've woven the words in an interesting fashion, so although familiar it is still new. Nice job.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Excellent...

piece of poetry. Well written and deserving of high praise.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Welcome to the poetry side of Lit's house with this well written piece of eros and its soft rhythmic sound.