a man for all seasons
buries his face in her fragrance
unafraid of winter
knowing the rose will still bloom
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what was and will be again, TK U MLJ LV NV
Beautiful loving erotica, Butters.
thanks, guys :flowers:
the opening line is perfect, sets the scene, the double connotations for the word buries is great adds thematically and in imagery, unafraid of winter reinforces the opening line and sets up the final lines,
the two colours at the end, pink and red, flesh and passionmore...
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