In Pleasure, In Pain

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Cinner
Cinner
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Hands caress supple orb
unblemished skin
silken feel
ripeness savoured
innocence plucked
nipple buds
orgasm blossoms.


Fingers trail down belly’s plain.


Touching moistened lips,
a camel’s toe.
Scooping honey from the comb,
and forgetting why they’ve come.

Ownership enforced
forgiveness sought
hand raised
pussy flogged.

Strike one: resolve shakes;
Strike three: the dam breaks;
Strike fourteen: orgasm blooms;
Strike fifteen: I’m in love.

Cinner
Cinner
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njoyjadenjoyjadealmost 12 years ago
Well done.

I like the style. I never thought to compare "scooping honey from the comb", pretty cool. I've had trouble understanding the same "other comment" issue pertaining to some of my submissions, but decided to stop spinning my wheels. :)

CinnerCinneralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks to Cara and Scotsman. I still don't understand the other comment, I've spent days trying, but thank you for reading my poem. I really do appreciate you taking the trouble. :o)

CaraDaileyCaraDaileyalmost 12 years ago
Wow

I can't express just how erotic and interesting I found this poem. Very moving. Keep up the great work!!!!!!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
So lovely.

Thank you, and keep writing. Please.

CinnerCinneralmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your kind comment FrostyZen! It's my first positive review ever! :o)

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