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ghost_girlover 16 years agoI agree
the subject and content are spot on, but I had trouble seeing the pale brown. It all seemed to blend together. Otherwise, good job :)
LeBrozover 16 years ago~~
Very fine piece. The only problem {IMO} is the washed-out look of the type which makes it hard to read. Perhaps needs a darker brown.
