tagNon-Erotic PoetryIn the midst of blue

In the midst of blue

bytodski28©

*In the midst of blue*

Laying back sipping my beer,
Undulating movement,
gentle rock, soothing sway
at one with the expanses.

Clouds hang weightlessly,
a tapestry reflects
in twin skies
Colours mix and change
tints, shift and swirl
greens, blues, blacks
mingle meaninglessly

From my side the
horizon punctuates
an exclamation point
on a land mass,

Craggy rocks
Flick up foamy spray
Misting the view
In white vapour

Another sip of beer,
cool, bitter sweet,
let my head lull
with the beat, in this
temperate splendour

tipping, rocking
drunk on beer and
natures beauty
such a lazy Sunday
in this sheer vastness
that caresses continents

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31706/02/14

WHETHER ITS SEA, SKY OR LAND

the ability to visualize is never greater, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Magnetron06/02/14

Relaxing. I dislike beer, but I was there as well.

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by pelegrino06/02/14

"lazying on a sunny afternoon..."
nothing wrong with that... beer is sufficient and description very imaginative, I personally don't want anything "deeper".
5ed.

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by Trixareforkids05/27/14

I've seen the twin skies...

On Mirror Lake. I was with you the whole way, just wish I could've had you pass me a beer.

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by Tsotha04/28/14

The first time I read this was in the forum. I think it was a different version, though, and I'm not sure whether this is the edit, or the version I read on the forum is an edit. Or maybe I'm just confused.

Anyway.more...

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