Incisive

bytungtied2u©

pious poets posture
pick the perfect word
preferring syntax over substance

edit the emotion
submerge it in an ocean
of overthoought

morph the humanity into
boring inanity
fuck the perfection
fuck the relfection

moments of heart and hurt
are not about revision
but the incisons of the moment
open wounds
witout sutures
bleeding
gasping
pleading
expiring

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