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demure101
demure101
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Night comes in verticals: the badly-lit
cast-iron crutches of the hollow halls,
dim areas of lifelessness beyond

the dripping lampposts. Thin, insistent rain
forms shading, white across a field of cold,
grey wetness. Round the arcs the halos drip

their diamonds straight below, and down the road
reflections in the pavement double all
those lines; in here the darkness sickly shines.

demure101
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PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 11 years ago
Standout!

This poem mentioned in New Poems Recommendations, well done.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed

tell us more Mr Mathew -Project 356creative- thread time baby, be careful though,

contradicting somewhat Ishtat, but this one

cold,

grey wetness.

does look like a no thought

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE RAINS REFLECTIONS

mirror the topside of the road way. TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago

This effectively conveys a spooky scene. I am totally stumped the title. To the point where it is distracting. As for the Mathew problem, I'd slam him for taking your poems on whatever site it is he got them in the first place.

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
for ishtat

I missed the cliche-Z ...could you point them out?

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