It Comes

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Tomorrow
stalks us
sleek and hungry
   and hot

We are its prey;
our conflicting desires its blood scent:

   the phenomenal –
      devouring all else
      impossible to surpass
      or even again equal
         devastating in its perfection;

   the sublime –
      whetting its appetite for more
      and more and still more
         addicting in its repletion;

   and the just good enough –
      making it well worth risk
      but not worth repeat
         liberating in its extinction.

We cling to fading strength
as it circles, ravenous.
Relentless.
Our cave of will
scant shelter. Vigilance
no longer enough to keep
the inevitable at bay.

It comes.

~ ~ ~

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IT COMES AT SUNSET

awaiting the morn on the eastern horizon. TK U MLJ LV NV

sassynycsassynycabout 16 years ago
your name says it all.........

you are so very impressive...your phrasing...your wit....

you make words a living entity

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It came...

...and I couldn't find my cave.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow!

Hot and tasty. Great writing.

Syn

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Your poetry

is devastating in its perfection. And addicting... Thank you, Imp. LJ.

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