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It's All About Eve

byHoneyAdored©

Stop being Adam'ant, that you are not a snake
There's only Him and I, but you choose to go bi
You would be all alone, if it were not for me
He maybe in your head but I'm reality

Do you need a sign? Change water into wine?
Please let me be your vice, I'll show you Paradise
Forget Genesis, I'll be your Nemesis
I am 'O'riginal sin, Eve'il, the Devil's twin

Who do you worship more?
Is it me or Him?
Am I not more divine?
Cum! Worship at my shrine
No need to fantasise,
Your bone between my thighs

Pray set my bush ablaze
I have the power to raise
Take my virginity, My Hole'y Trinity
And though I'll shout His name, it will not be in vain
I only ask of thee, an apple from that tree

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by HoneyAdored08/12/14

Thank you! Thank you!

@ Guy...I can but thank you for enjoying my poem and favouriting
I'm so pleased you get my writtings

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by guysimple167408/12/14

excellent

Wordplay, rhyme, philosophy between the lines (and thighs). This poem takes one to places never imagined, the paradise, the hell, and ensures that both are same! Rather, one is the compliment of the other,more...

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by HoneyAdored08/04/14

@JWren

I am totally made up by all your comments and so pleased that you enjoy my writing and have taken the time to feedback your thoughts :-)

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by JWren08/04/14

Well done

A new representation of the oldest story in the Book. Superb wordplay and justifiably deserves all the favourable comments and ratings.

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by HoneyAdored06/29/14

@Tazz

Thank you for your lovely rhyming comments. I'm not going to pretend I know what all those letters mean, but I am hoping that they are all good :-)

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