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Click hereJack-off Junkie
At first it's just a part of having sex,
of making love with "the one you love"
the making out, the kissing and petting
getting your hands inside her blouse,
inside her panties
and feeling your cock grow hard
till it aches with urgency
ready to explode at the slightest touch.
At first it's just a part
of the excitement of love,
the excitement of being close and touching,
the tender words and thoughts
that two people share
as they share their bodys' pleasures,
at first it's just a part.
But soon the edge is gone
a kiss, a touch is not enough
your body aches for more
you want it need it NOW,
you need her body pressing down
her hands her lips her legs
you need her body, NOW!
Then, in the glow of sweet release
your mind is blank your body weak
the monkey's gone away,
till once again the craving's back
'cause just like smack
if a little bit is good
a lot is so much better.
I didn't like your poem. It was more of a note talking about j/o than a poem. The ones who said it was good are barely poets themselves. Try harder.
The first stanza is good and original but the subsequent ones digress badly. Look at you writing in the first and work on bring the rest up to that standard. There should be no lazy or unnecessary words in poetry.