- Erotic Poetry
- jagged rock winter
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Click herejagged rock winters
like hearts torn apart
tears frozen in drift winds sorrow
caress a feel of smooth wore stone
hearing the howeling winds moan
man atop his throne
grown
then stone
cold fridged wind
shapes the sharp
and refines the edges
no pledges
tick tock
just winters
at jagged rock
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 19 years agois a wonderful title and makes a great line in the poem.
"tears frozen in drift winds sorrow" is a good line.
I think the second stanza could be improved with a little editing.
And the last two stanza are good, too.
sackover 19 years agoPoetry doesn't get too much better than that! I have a couple of questions...in the second stanza, did you purposefully choose "wore" or did you want "worn"? Then, later, did you mean "howling?" Another word I wasn't sure about is "friged". "fringed"? "frigid"? Love the poem anyway, just bringing these words to your attention.
