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Click hereJazz is ...
the dancing smoke
that stings my eyes.
the grainy flavor
of vodka on my lips.
the high moon
outside my window.
the call
of my imagination.
the fingers that glide
across a keyboard.
the story I create
and throw away.
the far reaching longings
and present fears.
the night.
a moment.
everything in between.
This is Jazz.
I love this poem. I am a fan of certain kinds of jazz and this poem made me recall instantly my favourite songs. Love your work.
(you knew there was a "but" coming, right?) <B>BUT</B> I wanted it to be smoother, less abrupt stops. Perhaps if you broke your lines less or differently it would be more moody, less of a list. Thanks for this though.<P>
Tess