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Click herePurple tip,
Soils pure
crimson rage
soiling thought
blood red,
soiled hands
dirt brown,
soils clothes
yellow fear
soiling clarity
blue uniform,
soiled life
Dark cell
Forever
yellow fear
soiling clarity
I think I just ran over him; yes probably the best, if you are interested in the tension created by minimal lines Senna Jawa has two lines in a thread nameless nonbeing check it out, you should probably read everything he says, he's no bullshit, but a advise caution in taking that route completely.
Now as to the colours are you painting a rainbow of death? The colours and the soiled are a little done to death.
Now you being a bouncer, I do want you to check out the first line in mine, just say it twice, sound not word meaning, you must have seen it a lot.
5ed because you are not doing walkthoughs
I think you're building your understanding of both metaphor and rhetoric. Just my opinion and for an experiment it's not bad! I especially like
yellow fear
soiling clarity
Thanks for the feedback, gotta keep trying new things
lonely place in as few words as possible : really dig your Minimalist style , Tod !