Jet Stream

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fridayam
fridayam
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Midsummer mocks us with
bluster and chill more fitting our
scorching April and we
shrill of climate change while the
Jet Stream goeth
where it listeth
shrieking west to east to
simmer Summer somewhere.

fridayam
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fridayamfridayamalmost 13 years agoAuthor
TY

"The wind goeth where it listeth" is from the Bible, John 3:8, and the words felt appropriate here. Thanks for the comments.

DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years ago
I thought

Goeth and listeth were a tongue in cheek association with ye olde Midsummer, which is why I smiled. But if I'm wrong about that then yes, I agree the words could be stated in more modern language.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 13 years ago
I......

.....have to disagree with the previous comment, the "goeth/listeth" grates for me as being out of place - "goes where it wll" seems just as good, the former adds nothing in an otherwise nice little poem.

Tess

DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years ago
Clever

I have to say I smiled warmly at the "jet stream goeth/where it liseth". I like this.