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was slim as a cigarette
and I used him as one,
dragging him deep into my lungs
like opium smoke. He came,
politely, in my throat
but always before I quite got high,
so I wiped his taste away with gin
and licorice whips and stubbed
his mewed moan right out of my life.
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Neonuroticover 12 years agoSmoking hot!
Wow, steamy and good work here. I like your use of metaphor in this and the word play.
