- Erotic Poetry
- Julianne
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Click hereSitting under a tree on a soft hill as a tender breeze gently kisses your neck.
Seduced as the sky fades from shimmering reds and stunning golds to elegant purple and silken blue.
I hold you close as the last brilliant rays caress the hilltops and the timeless sun sinks below the horizon.
Left to frolic among the stars and dream of what the future holds.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoI can't believe I am going to say this but I wanted to cry at you: why did you abort the poem that soon? The beginning was the strongest when you let nature depict what you might have wished to do. Then you moved to a very sensual description (I could never get tired of it) of the changing colors as the sunset progresses, perhaps alluding to a promising progression between the couple. Then you jumped off the piece... For me the frolicking and the stars at the end didn't follow. But all that came before had such promise. Hope you keep it in future poems...
