- Poetry With Audio
- just a breath away
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Click herebreathe in
not thinking
of how I want
I want to throw her
against the wall
and taste her lips
feel the air inside her
brush past my face
from the impact
following up with my body
before her heart beats
against me one more time
lifting her up
forcing her legs
around my waist
hoping someone is watching
something sinful
wanton wicked ways
to find myself inside her
not lasting very long
not this time
breathe out
smile at the pretty lady
- COMMENTS
driphoneyalmost 14 years agoI enjoyed hearing how you envision this, with your own voice and inflection, but I also love seeing how you choose to put the words down in print, and my own interpretation of this very erotic, well-done poem. Thanks, Fool.
slowrimmeralmost 14 years agoI didn't know what to expect. I like the option to put more life into the words, which were good on their own btw. I think many others will like this.
Tzaraalmost 14 years agoNice erotic poem, Mr. Fool.
I quite liked your narration. You have a nice voice, but what was particularly interesting is that how you pronounce certain vowels reminds me of another Kansas resident we both know. I don't think I would have noticed it except that she has read her poems too, and when you're listening to someone read a poem, you're more focused on sound than usual.
I assume that is some kind of regional accent mojo goin' on.
Or I'm daydreaming.
I like that wall thing. I'm big on walls.
Metaphorically.
