just a thought

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4degrees
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averted
in a word,
perverted
a personal twist
lipless distrust
write my name
in rust colored
bodymade paint
across your
insensativities
no question of
possession,
with mine in yours,
unmistakeably
buried way up in
that hot cavern
filled up with my
potency, almost
seems to bring
you around,
bring you back
to life.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

I agree with 1201, but either way (bodypaint or not) I like.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 17 years ago
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write my name

in rust colored

bodymade paint

across your

insensativities

Try this: take out "bodymade", paint on line by itself, so it can be read as "paint across your..." etc. Just a thought. I like the quirky rhyme buried in this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good stuff

good stuff, Curt

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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