- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Just Do It
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Just Do It
but first,
take a few deep breaths,
give a salutation to the sun
(or the tempest if it likes you,)
take a vacation in Liliputia,
have a Brobdingnagian breakfast,
visit the coffee-house turned fish-shop where your parents met,
smoke a joint in Stearns Cemetery at the bewitching hour,
cycle up and down the mall escalators
bathing in the brackish neon brilliance,
ponder how God as you don't understand him might judge your action,
and stop to smell the cities that rose from the cracks of the earth.
For you must believe
above the three-point line
a second before the buzzer
when "swoosh" comes to shove.
- COMMENTS
LadyJeanneabout 19 years agohated that "Just Do It" thing, but I like your way much better. All the 'but firsts" are what make the 'doing it' worthwhile. I liked this. Thanks, LJ.
Bridget69about 19 years agoA great poem about living life to the fullest and experiencing diverse adventures.
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoSome wonderful lines
this read was like a pin ball
darting from one visual to another
basicly the deep breath before heading
into it all <grin> you need at least 4
to make the proper blood alkalie level change.<grin>
your poem ....was interesting
twelveooneabout 19 years agoyou have some great lines;
"have a Brobdingnagian breakfast,
...
bathing in the brackish neon brilliance,
...
when "swoosh" comes to shove."
but I have trouble following what this is about
