just once, for me?

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You have come in the whir
of bumblebee wings and visit
at each new moon when stars
are at their brightest. You come
as dew, the tears of angels
thankful for the rising sun
but you never come for me.

Do not come for the flowers
or the poetry of translucent wings
brushing petals. Do not come
as the first wail of a newborn
or the splash of surf against my knees.
Just come as you and bring your smile
your touch, your precious skin
kissed by mother sun. Just come.

and this time, come for me.

for Him

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 16 years ago
Loved it especially

Just come as you and bring your smile ... lovely

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Wonderfully expressive without resorting to maudlin dripping sentimentality

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful

This could've easily been full of clichés, but you didn't do that. Beautifully expressed. I imagined king swallowtails in the summer morning sun. Thank you. -Jamison

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