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Liar
Liar
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jesus mercy mirrors muses
save my sliding spreading soul
thinning out in feedback clamour
swallowing my ego whole

thinning out in feedback clamour
rocking on semantic waves
short of breath and short of reason
that my lost libido craves

short of breath and short of reason
mind comes out but logic blurred
poured like mantra, not reaction
mocking mimic word by word

poured like mantra, not reaction
sentiment and style escape
jesus mercy mirrors muses
someone, give me back my shape

Liar
Liar
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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Wonderful!

The alliteration alone :) makes this a fantastic read--but you've just worked the form beautifully and it supports the content which, imho, is the way it's 'sposed to work.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
The Song of Liarwatha

A Scandinavian Longfellow reuses a classic poem's form perfectly,

adding alliteration.

In fact the rhythmic cadence is so strong that you may have to read the poem several times just to get past the pleasure of the structure and into the meat.

A strong 5 that you should read and enjoy.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
well, Damn!!

it seems that the passion thread is spawning some terrific poetry lately!! very glad youposted this poem Liar, I especially love the flow, it doesnt miss a beat :)