Kind of Blue

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Angeline
Angeline
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Maybe it's all kind of blue,
like skies shift languid dawning
soft as miles but insistent.
Time proceeds in brushbeats
and low chords swing quiet

until eventually we turn over
and arise in sleepy blinks,
in waking swallows passing
from track to blowy track,
round-toned. My orange

tastes of morning: sweet sunny,
encircled in bright. Just unpeel
my life, dig it, and forget
the pith: it's all segmented
anyway. Eat it piecemeal.

Later it's a little green,
unfolding preachy soul calls,
dancing heartbeat sings
along coaxial neurons ringing
hip doors, rock rolling hours.

Angeline
Angeline
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5 Comments
jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
I hear Miles here...

especially slow... his slow songs that seem to drip from the horn, the hiss of a beat that is more than sound. A nice jazz here.

jim : )

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
Yes.

A poem to savor, to roll on your tongue.

bluerainsbluerainsabout 20 years ago
last verse

was very original ...enjoyed the journey...smiles/bluerain

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
no suggestions here

lovely as always, thanks for letting me peek in, its an honor :)

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
What to do with the orange pips of life?

Life is not all jazzy, you know.

But you sure can swing it with the best of 'em.

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