King of the Pine~

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~King of the Pine~

A tall wide Pine
full of moss and vine.
Tree bark fly
as leaves are sent sailing.

A small black bird flutters
in hover
with squawking loud calls.

Scampers a squirrel
in a ring around the rosy
spiral ascent
like candy cane swirls.

The black bird dove
with Kamikaze dives,
pecking and striking at
a fluffy waving long brown tail.

In snickering chatter taunts
a tail in flicking lure,
hop spring then leap
from tree limb to tree limb.

Pine cones fall like hand-grenades,
its needles, dropping darts,
where ever the black bird would land
the squirrel would shake the limb.

A squawk and flapping
then another dive,
assault in flight
as tiny talons grasp a busy tail
and pulls.

The squirrel was tag teamed
by its enemies,
black birds
and gravity!


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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
GRAVITY!

"The squirrel was tag teamed

by its enemies,

black birds

and gravity!"

wow...doesn't that apply to most everyone's days! LOL it's never enough for just one thing to get us down...problems crash in from all sides and truly abound!

Loved it Arty!

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Very good...

examination of territorial instincts among nature's creatures.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
this has a bit.........

predatory elements in this setting of nature you've built up here. the ending shows that predator element......nicely don.......don

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
YOU are king...

of at least the tree poems lately, Art! I love the phrase, " The squirrel was tag teamed by its enemies, black birds and gravity!" I can imagine seeing that happening <laughin'> I always enjoy your works of nature and this piece was no exception.<smile>

Vixxx

ishtatishtatalmost 19 years ago
Sailing

Good poem. I was struck by the thought that can a pine needle sail or is its destiny to be jealous of the broadleaved trees harbouring ambitions of saildom ?

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