Kirlian

byTzara©

what finally slapped me in the groin
was the travel of your hips
toward the bar, which I saw as if
you'd been spread on a photographic plate
and smacked with some huge charge
because your aura glowed red
as a five-alarm blaze
and not even Nina Kulagina
could have gotten a cold read off you
that night, anyway

thank god more skin than just my fingertips
got scorched

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by oneiria08/04/13

Photographing auras.

I am amazed that someone remembers Kirlian photography and Nina Kulagina after four decades have passed since this research.

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by Angeline08/04/13

I remember this poem, I think

it was either submitted or posted on the forum? Anyway it's an utterly swoony combination of smart and sexy, smart serving to fan the blazes. It's just long enough to provide the snapshot, which is sortmore...

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by UnderYourSpell08/04/13

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Phewwwwwww *fans self* certainly got hot here too!

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by todski2808/04/13

Tied all together

From title to finish neat and precise as with pretty much everything I have read of yours :-)

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by Tzara08/04/13

Hi, todski!

Thanks for the comment. The title refers to Kirlian photography (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kirlian_photography) .

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