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Knotted Yarn

bytodski28©

Gently I tease another loop
from the length
a snarled tangle of
mess

no one has taken the time to
unfurl your kinks
so you can be whole then
wound up properly

not this knotted mass
of confliction
that is twisted up on itself

I will take the time
to pull out all the stops
wether soft or with force
that bind you up

so you can be free

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by Tsotha06/01/14

Damn, Tod. I wish I had written this.

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by twelveoone06/01/14

you do know

you have play in the title
I think so, you exploited it
5ed

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by Matryoshka05/31/14

Amazing how you can find beauty in a knarled mess, when most would rather stick it in a bin and hide it away....

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by Magnetron05/31/14

I so badly want you to change this to

Knotted Balls Of Yarn

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