Last Call

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Last call
By trendyredhead

Smoke
      What might have been
Hangs heavy
      Lines unused
Permeating
      What could have been
Too-tight clothes
      Lies untold
221-3988 Liz
      What should have been
Underneath the pay phone
      Sticky floor
Half-remembered conversation
      Spilled beer
Echoes
      Last call

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The MuttThe Muttover 19 years ago
I wouldn't wait

until last call.

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
I agree...

short and sweet yet shows a lot, also brings back memories of my favorite bar back home. Those were truly the good ol days!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I like this

Simple and evocative. Nice work.

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
So true..

I like this. Short, to the point and says more than expected.

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