- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Last Orders
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Click herehey
you
oi!
big guy
number one
the man
oh yes, the man
whydontcha
come over here
take your backpack baggage
of inept attitude with you
and settle your self delusional
sense of superiority
one man majority
I'm waiting
for your self imposed
holier-than-thou
high horse, happy horseshit
witless, pointless boring grit
yes
please
come here
and try your thing
wanking sheer volume
disguised as weight
to impose your hollow helpless
weak and voiceless will
it will be
the last fucking orders
you'll ever bark
- COMMENTS
Lauren Hyndealmost 20 years agoStrong and fast paced, like many of your best. I really love this side of your poetry.
minsuealmost 20 years agoAt last a smile to go with the tears wrought by today's poems. A bitter, sarcastic smile, but quite satisfying in it's way. ;)
Liaralmost 20 years agoAn original take on the title challenge. Unloading that rant that many hold in when confrunted with the self-important order barkers. Good pacing there. :)
jthserraalmost 20 years agoa distinct difficulty with authority figures in this one. Although I think there have been a number of recent events that I wish this attitude had been taken. Some nice tongue-in-cheek phrasing here.
jim : )
