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Click hereWill winter melt away
In mists of springtime?
Shall February be but a thought,
Soon replaced with early March,
Forgotten in summer haze?
Too early, yet,
To think of fall or even
Contemplate July's sultry daze.
Late winter lingers
Like a lover's kiss,
Or Valentine's faded bloom.
The promise of the groundhog,
Sleeping still.
I liked your inclusion of the four seasons in this late season thaw, and I found the ending to be beautiful in image ... a pleasure to read!
I am predjudiced against the word "Shall"
I had to force myself to read the poem after seeing that word and the first few lines felt like an overdramatic theatrical performance. Your ending was relevant, new, tangible.... it even made me go back and read it again with a more forgiving eye.
It's beautiful...your imagery is so clear and evocative...thanks for sharing your poetry
my favorite line..."contemplate July's sultry daze.." love it!! great job :)