Late Season Thaw

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Will winter melt away
In mists of springtime?

Shall February be but a thought,
Soon replaced with early March,
Forgotten in summer haze?
Too early, yet,
To think of fall or even
Contemplate July's sultry daze.

Late winter lingers
Like a lover's kiss,
Or Valentine's faded bloom.
The promise of the groundhog,
Sleeping still.

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JaneAustenJaneAustenalmost 16 years ago
Lovely!

I liked your inclusion of the four seasons in this late season thaw, and I found the ending to be beautiful in image ... a pleasure to read!

ScatteredShowersScatteredShowersabout 20 years ago
it ends very strong

I am predjudiced against the word "Shall"

I had to force myself to read the poem after seeing that word and the first few lines felt like an overdramatic theatrical performance. Your ending was relevant, new, tangible.... it even made me go back and read it again with a more forgiving eye.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
A very beautiful

wish for spring. Very good

jim : )

CoyoteCrushCoyoteCrushabout 20 years ago
loved it

It's beautiful...your imagery is so clear and evocative...thanks for sharing your poetry

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
ohhh, really good

my favorite line..."contemplate July's sultry daze.." love it!! great job :)

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