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Click hereuntended seeds will grow
sprawling intentions writhe
and multiply sometimes
without green fingers
ploughing the soil
and stranger flowers
unfold from unexpected buds
more beautiful than intention
with stems perhaps irregular
but stronger than ever
tend your rose garden
safe from fire and infection
but please prune with care
and self perseverance
marvel instead of meddle
and you will in parallel
grow wild with renegade roses
rising among fragrances
richer than fiction spawned
from untended seeds
when i think about your age, i'm amazed at the depth you have..
this was totally a joy to read.
xo
A well used metaphor
grown with interesting phrases,
and alliteration watered.
Good phrases such as:
"marvel instead of meddle"
"renegade roses"
a neat combination of lecture and poem! I could use a lecture on gardening...
I really like this.
~and you will in parallel
grow wild with renegade roses
rising among fragrances
richer than fiction spawned
from untended seeds ~
That's a great finish
Nice work
Thank you