Lesser Celandine

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demure101
demure101
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Bleak winter turned grey spring. The drifting clouds
block out the sun on days too short and dull
that go from moist to mist with in between

the shivering hours. There's not much to choose
as time shifts seasons, slipping from one cold
into the other, from the freezing drought

to cloying mud upon the broken road,
its surface wrecked as thaw took over. High
up in the trees a single bird calls, then

dries up to watch morosely as I make
my way along the footpath to the wood's
ubiquity - forever dark, its floor

forever springy - when my eye is struck
by green and yellow transience, hoped-for sign
the grey may lift somewhere along the line.

demure101
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DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
There will be time...

"Time for you and time for me,

And time yet for a hundred indecisions,

And for a hundred visions and revisions,

Before the taking of a toast and tea."

Smiles at you...

demure101demure101about 11 years agoAuthor
Dear Dawn,

Let us go then, you and I....

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Inevitability

Seasons come and seasons go, like the women talking of Michaelangelo. :)

ArjayEiffArjayEiffabout 11 years ago
one word

in the entire poem only "forever" jarred in the transition from v4 to v5. In something otherwise marvelous it seemed lazy.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
The green rag of Spring

sets bood boiling, nice