Let Me

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leahcarr
leahcarr
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Let my breathless moan be the wind in your sail,
Let my rocking hips carry you away.
Let my open arms be your shelter,
Let my eager lips take your kiss and your confession.
My body is your temple, your worship my addiction; every time you kneel and pray, I take you in a little deeper.
Let your ship find safe harbor in me, take my hand as you journey on,
Let my desire build you,
Let my aching fill you,
close your eyes and die your thousand little deaths.
My altar doors will open for you, your moans will light a fire there.
Let our burning take us under,
Take me,
There,
To my favorite place,
My place is under
(with) you.

leahcarr
leahcarr
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leahcarrleahcarrabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading!

Thank you everyone who has read my poems! Please leave or send comments, it's so wonderful to get feedback and encouragement (though I'm not entirely certain that that "wind" comment is constructive, really.) I hope that you enjoy them as much as I do :)

I am working on several stories, and hope to have some beginnings up soon. New poems should be up semi regularly, as I have been inspired rather often recently.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Praying at the Alter....

The perfect place to kneel allowing the sweetest of addictions nourishing two souls. Thanks for sharing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
you have got to be careful with the word "wind"

especially followed by rocking hips but perhaps it is appropriate here