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Click hereTake me away
On a tour of the stars
Show me the path
To my peace
Lift up my spirit
To where it longs to be
Show me your magic
Let me be
You’ve shown me a world
I’ve only seen in dreams
Waterfalls and forests
Reflecting the silver moon
Lovers caressing
Along the beach
Lost souls found
Please, let me be
So take my hand
Lead me along your golden path
Show me your world
Let me be yours
Take my heart
Cage it as your own
A heartbeat away
Let me be
This is not bad poetry, but it doesn't rise to the level of making me feel or think strongly. Some of the ideas and imagery are a bit jaded for me. Still, it's not bad. Keep going...