L?Hotel de Campos

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darkmaas
darkmaas
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Delila, or maybe it was Mary
cut off an ear
and mailed it to her mother
said Vincent asked her to
Her mother thanked her sweetly
sent fragrant lilies
and gave the ear to Jesus
understanding
what it was
to be
a flesh receiver

The neon’s broken
and all that’s left is
L’HOT
which flashes
at the darkness
in two four time
like some marching madman
but huddling for the human touch
we are more syncopated
cool
cocooned
within the lobby bar

Miss Q is lying
curled up at our feet
“Too much pink champagne”
says our lady of stilettos
and pours herself a glass
“She sent another
postcard
to Fernando
yesterday
he’s likely dead by now
poet’s do that
go and die
never bothering to tell
their distant lovers”

Tiny Q awakes
“Who’s died?”
“Poet”
“A poet passed away?”
“Passed wind more like”
she had thought we spoke
of dark Fernando
sighs then waves the emptied bottle
at the singing waiter
sits next to me
and puts it on my tab
“Flat chested and flat broke
what’s a girl to do?”
and lays her hand
discretely
on my indifference

The waiter sings on Tuesdays
when he’s had a few
tells the mostly empty lounge
about his days in Prague

“Come sit / by me / my dear
I can / be real/ly sweet
I’ve dipped / my dick / in honey
Come kneel / here at / my feet”

He thinks he’s Leonard
but this ain’t the Chelsea baby
no limos
purring
in the rain

“Oooh, but love is grand
Care to dance?”
there are no takers

Like Eliot’s cat
a fog
drowns our chamber
they talk slowly
dropping whisky wit
while I consider
the giving and receiving flesh

darkmaas
darkmaas
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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
not intimidated!!

my computer kept freezing up..

darkmaas, this is elegant, rich and complex, I simply love it, especially this part--

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poet?s do that

go and die

never bothering to tell

their distant lovers?

deserves way more than just a 5 ;)

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
something about leonard

I am glad to see that I am not the only one too intimidated by this poem to leave a comment. "This ain't the Chelsea" damn that is good wonder how many people have lived there without ever being.

thanks for dropping this beauty onto us. I want to read it about 14 more times before saying anything else.

you don't seem like the type of man who gets too excited about little red letters but where the hell is the one for this poem?

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