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Click hereLike That & Like That
by
Denise Noe
I took my turn
Yelling & laughing
My friends & me
Yelling & screaming & laughing
& slapping & hearts pounding
Thru the piece of ass screaming
Gang rapes are like that
I wasn't first this time, or last either
Waiting my turn
Felt my buddies jizz churning
In my own balls
I got my turn Bang-oh-bang!
Oh Hey! Oh Bang! Fuck her fuck her!
Wowohwowohwow
All the way thru the piece of ass
screaming
stop-no-stop-no-no-stop
Oh wow oh man give it to her!
& the piece of ass crying
like
busted glass on her face
Gang rapes are like that, you know
The other guys left the piece of ass
Lying on the ground
She was dirty & smelly
All cock-eyed, spread & done
the piece of ass lying
where they left
her
a big piece of dirty
on the dirty ground
Gang rapes are always like that
I stayed behind
I went over to the piece of ass
folded her up
took her to the gutter
where I hosed her down
the sewer
left the water on running
full blast to get rid of the stain
I washed the piece of ass
down the sewer
& left things clean
See, other guys are dirty
but I'm not
I keep things clean
just my nature
to be fastidious
because I'm like that
Earlier version published in “Wicked.”
Interesting comments by anon, but I think the poem simply shows how ugly the situation was. As far as poetry? Not bad.
It's supposed to be satirical but I don't buy it. Too much "fun" in the description of the pleasure of torturing a woman. But hey, that's a sure way to be 'cool' now days, meaning: show that you too can really understand cruelty; sadism. And since it was published somewhere it has to be mentioned here too of course. The way tradition goes, it soon will appear with Lit's "quality" approval . Way to go!
This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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