lil bird

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A stroll
along a path
beaten and worn
a soft patch of grass

Vine and vegetation
a green and brown wall
a trail through trees
that umbrella in awe
Where tall pines tower
over wide mingled oaks
and maple leafs paint colorful patches
on vertical white posts

walking I hear
a 'click' and a flutter
something darting
in the dense cover
landing and looking
back at me
a lil brown bird,
I do see

A tiny feather ball
hyperly hopping
from branch to branch
chirping and chirping
a soothing sound
this bird sang
echoed loudly
again and again

Little stick legs
grasping small limbs
white little belly
yellow beaked grin
a chirp and a hop
and a leap into air
a moment in time
with a lil bird, shared

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A vision well shared from an earlier verse;

a walk down a path was never seen more real...

sacksackover 19 years ago
One of your best.....

And perhaps you have found your forte....painting realistic, vivid snapshots of nature!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very nice

loved your detailed description, very colorful. nice job.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
very nice

only one small thing: I do see

You may want to change that to "I see" or just drop that line.

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