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Click hereAre you as sensual, as magical as I have read?
If so, you the woman of my dreams, he said.
I want to know you, to touch you, to make you mine.
No, you want a compelling mystery, you are blind.
I am as real and lurid as a bruise on pale flesh.
And I cause just as much pain, when pressed.
- COMMENTS
Sapphos Sisterover 17 years agoI think that the two stanzas work well together and the poem works as a whole.
A lot said in only a few words.
anonamouseover 18 years agowasn't me that left the comment - the Neurotic trail knows it too. As for the poem. There is a disconnect between the first set of lines and the second set. that would have to explained further. The last three lines would stand on their own, enough mystery.
anonamouse - aka 1201
My Erotic Trailover 18 years agoit's ashame but true <grin.. what is ...is, we place our hearts out for others to read and some anonamouse comes along and bruises it while telling you they are toughening your thin skin while disecting your words unable to see your heart <grin... nice write.
