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Literotica: Feedback

byKR©

Are you as sensual, as magical as I have read?
If so, you the woman of my dreams, he said.
I want to know you, to touch you, to make you mine.

No, you want a compelling mystery, you are blind.
I am as real and lurid as a bruise on pale flesh.
And I cause just as much pain, when pressed.

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