Little Leaf

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She was the first leaf to fall,
in autumn all red and gold
Someone picked her up,
and marveled at the beauty
Until her colors started to fade,
then she was simply thrown away

Laying on the roots of the tree,
she watched as the others took color
Falling together in a mosaic,
fitting perfectly

She sat alone as the others,
laid upon her with their
beautiful colors
Her brown an eyesore,
her holes a disgrace

She was quickly covered,
by the golden others
forgotten
not important

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libra_ladylibra_ladyover 11 years agoAuthor
Actually

I don't know why I call any of this poetry, anything I write is really just random thoughts and feelings that I jot down. Thank you for the comments!

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 12 years ago
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Actually tazz didn't criticize he just observed !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
very well written

As for tazz317 and kstarnes....its funny how 2 BOYS who have not written anything at all can be so critical of the ppl who do write....maybe they are just jealous b/c they have no talent and feel the need like all jealous school kids and try to belittle the ones who do have a talent for writting....really kids get a life

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
TILL THE SEEDS BEGIN TO SPROUT

then she will become the 1st. TK U MLJ LV NV

kstarneskstarnesabout 12 years ago
IT WOULD

have been better with some pruning, LOLOLOLOL. I have a rake you can borrow to get rid of that old brown. You tried too hard to be good. Let it come naturally. This is forced, hence, boring

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