The laughing spring that will return no more
brought urgent questions, that are bound to find
no hoped-for answers, and a silent mind,
and moonlight streaming on an empty floor.
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...is the interrogation room AND the interrogator of the soul.
The silent mind ....hmm ....might be sad ..... Moonlight on the floor is definitely pathos ---- silvery , seductive .....even suggestive ---- magical , mystical ..... perhaps miracle or miraculous ! Total combo makes for great Poetrymore...
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