- Erotic Poetry
- Long Distance
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Click here'A picture is worth a thousand words',
Twas said once.
Long distance calls,
emails, and texts,
no substitute,
for one glance,
or look of my lover's eyes.
After hours connecting,
I know her well,
my unseen lover,
but not really at all.
How does she look
under pale moonlight?
Does she talk to herself
or plump lips bite ?
How does she smile
after soft kiss given?
Do her eyes burn
while being ridden?
What is the sound
of her heart's desire?
Does she moan, or cry,
when taken higher?
How does her breast
feel in my palm?
How does her scent
smell on my arm?
What are the ways
she'll tease and delight?
Waiting and wondering
all through the night.
Long distance amour
so hard for sure.
Time is slow,
So hard to endure.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoOnly someone who's been in a LDR would understand this :) I enjoyed this piece and often asked the same questions. Not until she was in my presence were my questions asked.
Magnetronabout 10 years ago'A picture is worth a thousand words',
But you don't have a picture of her. Instead, you have alot of questions.
Build on the foundation of concrete you already poured.
I say, tack on an ending with something like
'Sitting here and staring at an empty picture frame worth a thousand questions'
Anyhoo, you are off to a good start.
Magnum69about 10 years agoAuthorHi All, This is my first submission and I've only been writing a few weeks so please be generous with your comments and votes. it'll help me get better.
oneiriaabout 10 years agoIt sounds as though it may be long past time for a meeting. Or is a dream preferable to waking reality? This is a thought-provoking poem.
