- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Longing
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so angry I’m sometimes
sad and confused
alone then how I feel
and lonesome amidst loved ones
I hardly recognize myself
strangely unfamiliar
tears nearer than laughter ever was
never enough - always too much
everything so hard
even thoughts predictable and uninspired
how I want to dance
to burst with joy and laughter
with unreserved delight
mind at peace and free and unconcerned
nothing pent up - no untimely sorrows
naught but a smile
exuding love and
elated pleasure
Just watch me dance!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 18 years agoand yet so much hope. You have an amazing way with words, you make me feel like I am staring right into your naked beautiful fucking soul, and I cried.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agofor you now have what will inspire you the most: his love. Although I know the meaning behind this poem and the dramatic and somber time frame from which it stems, I hear the awakening of renewed lust for life toward the end of this piece. From the heart wrenching, "tears nearer than laughter ever was" to the final line of spirit and strength, I am sure...
Yes,anna~ just watch you dance! <hugs>
Vixxx
EmJ0385about 18 years agoIt's the way I feel when my boyfriend's not near---you feel incomplete & just want him there to make you feel whole and happy again.
LeBrozabout 18 years agoDon't know the 'background story' but I can clearly see the dichotomy between the way things are and the way you wish they'd be. The title here is so appropriate...
Many Feathersabout 18 years agoOf deep feeling emotion in this one baby. Well written. though knowing the background behind this, I have a better understanding than most. Still...the imagery, impact is extremely well done and thought provoking. Love you "My Anna"
