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Lost, a deception
a curse with no name.
Desire to eradicate
a pain that is mine
Hope, a conviction
a lie hidden in love
Confusion, a maze
a riddle with no solution
Passion, a hoax
leading to a shattered heart
Lost, a memory
a love gained and then lost
Love, a lie
a deceptive act.
Why can't I stop
Why should I fight
it's just not worth...
all the pain.
- COMMENTS
Bridget69about 19 years agoConveys so many deep emotions that we've all experienced at one time or another, but I do have to say that they're all worth it, because despite the outcome, we still get to learn something from them.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThis work ran down fast..pain flowing from word to word..
I would like to see some alternate wording used here to describe the essence of the work more... because the emotional quality is strong ... just needs a different stroking of rhetoric to bring forth the picture of originality..
thank you for the read..
Du Lac~
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