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slavegurl
slavegurl
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Lost and found


Lost in memories

Your touch
on my face
my neck
my breasts
my back
my ass
Cupping me in your hands
And cradling that swell you love
  Pulling me to you

Holding me
Desiring me
Possessing me

But I could never hold you for long
     
I can still feel you
Inside me
The heat
The passion
The fire deep in me
That only you ignite
             only you quench

lost in the memories of your mouth
          on my mouth
          on my breast
          on the very core of my womanhood
touching
tasting
feasting
searing me
branding me
    here
                  here
           and
here
But you are not here
 you are lost
 


perhaps now I can be found

slavegurl
slavegurl
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
WELL DONE

I WOULD HAVE LIKED IT EVEN MORE IF SOME OF THE ME AND AND S WERE LEFT OUT JUST LET IT FLOW. GOOD JOB.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
nice job

way to go gurl. it's wonderful,smiles

LilSweetAngelLilSweetAngelabout 19 years ago
very pleasing..

I really enjoyed this dear. It is simply wonderful. I believe you caught the moment you wanted to express well. Congrats. I liked the way you structured the poem. It gave it a bit more attitude I think. I really like the way that you ended it as well. I hope you find what you're looking for. I'm in your corner for sure.

Take care,

Ashley

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Not bad!

Quote:

Your touch

on my face

my neck

my breasts

my back

my ass

I like this, but I probably would've eliminated some words like the, my and me.

Your touch on my face,

neck, back, breasts

and ass

Quote:

Holding me

Desiring me

Possessing me

Holding, desiring

and possessing me

Just a little too much repetition for me. But a pleasure to read. Thank you.