love is gone

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dawei
dawei
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love is new........
love is wonderful..
love is nervous.......
love is exciting.........
love is good...............
love is great.................
love is everything..........
love is love..................
love is careless...........
love is sorrowful.......
love is forgiveness..
love is confusing...
love is painful.....
love is empty....
love is hurt.....
love is sad....
love is gone.

(a simple poem of caution)

dawei
dawei
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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not quite there

I like the idea of the narrator altering the description as their experience of love turns sour with the meaning of love transforming as the poem progresses but the rendering of this good idea isn't up to scratch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Eh, you asked for feedback..

This isn't a poem, it's a shopping list.