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Click hereWe rode across the river,
splashing as we clopped along
in autumn’s varied colors.
I synched my seat to the gait,
standing in stirrups at each bounce,
leaning forward as we climbed.
We stopped to rest our mounts, and
I unsaddled them, brushed their coats,
and gave each a cup of oats.
Galaxies whirled in their eyes
and sunlight surged around them
like water rushing past boulders.
I felt their hearts pump my blood
when you pressed against my butt
and cupped my tits in your big hands.
I smelled wilderness on your breath
as you pulled my sweater off
and I ripped your shirt open.
We fucked like wild beasts in heat
and then rode home in silence,
each lost in feral beauty.
I love your vignettes. Yeah, part of that is probably because I want to BE a character in many of them. I like the wildness of the imagery, and the place within it of the characters. Well done.
This is an excellent poem and getting a recommend. However I agree with Espie, the choice of words is wrong with the tone of this poem. I also have one other pick point; 'Galaxies whirled in their eyes' seemed off key with the concrete nature of this poem. Got 5 from me.