Love of Animals

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sandyb
sandyb
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We rode across the river,
splashing as we clopped along
in autumn’s varied colors.

I synched my seat to the gait,
standing in stirrups at each bounce,
leaning forward as we climbed.

We stopped to rest our mounts, and
I unsaddled them, brushed their coats,
and gave each a cup of oats.

Galaxies whirled in their eyes
and sunlight surged around them
like water rushing past boulders.

I felt their hearts pump my blood
when you pressed against my butt
and cupped my tits in your big hands.

I smelled wilderness on your breath
as you pulled my sweater off
and I ripped your shirt open.

We fucked like wild beasts in heat
and then rode home in silence,
each lost in feral beauty.

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DeepGreenEyesDeepGreenEyesabout 13 years ago
Can see it...

I love your vignettes. Yeah, part of that is probably because I want to BE a character in many of them. I like the wildness of the imagery, and the place within it of the characters. Well done.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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This is an excellent poem and getting a recommend. However I agree with Espie, the choice of words is wrong with the tone of this poem. I also have one other pick point; 'Galaxies whirled in their eyes' seemed off key with the concrete nature of this poem. Got 5 from me.

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Very well done....love the directness and being straightforward ;)

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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yeh, but a good title for it, otherwise I would agree with es.

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