Love Poem For a Country

Poem Info
139 words
4.57
31.1k
2
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

big bright black eyes and oiled hair
she adjusts her dupatta oblivious
to small, dirty hands reaching out
onerupee onerupee
hello, onerupee

step out of plastic sandals
to worship with marigold petals
at the feet of Krishna, Shiva, Lakshmi
this is your Karma
you earned it

thick air and sweat
rattle over grimy tracks
chai! chai! chai! wakes every station
old Auntie reaches out
smiles me a mango

milk for my baby
coins from your country
very best guide
you like henna tattoo
Psst. fucking... fucking?

no mother, no father, no husband
wailing echoes through the market
yeah, me neither
that's why I'm here
have another bhang lassi

white girl with dreads asks me
where's the sitar and the tabla
where's Ravi Shankar and higher consciousness
where's the real India?

Psst. you're soaking in it.

Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
5 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE STRIFE IN ALL 3RD WORLD AREAS

is limitless epidemical. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

Looking for the weird or the mystical; that's not the real India.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

Looking for the weird or the mystical; that's not the real India.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
a country.

A realistic portrait of street life in India. Echoes of the real thing ~ as total immersion takes place. Fascinating relating of street conversations.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
An almost

surreal look at the reality there. We see a picture of the Taj Mahal here and have no idea of the living conditions. Your poem provides a glimpse...

jim :)

Share this Poem

Similar poems