tagErotic PoetryLove this time

Love this time

bySweetOblivion©

Let winter wait a while: it can bide
its time, while you remember and recall.
Don't stand in the chill water; for the tide
will soon freeze over: icy leaves will fall
around your feet, but you evoke desires.
These choice delights have never disappeared.
Like ash, they smolder, as will all the fires
that you'll rekindle once the mists have cleared.


Then you can find your focus and design
ideas and concepts of a different kind.
There are thanks giving feasts you can't decline,
though trees are stripped. And stripping brings to mind
a different strand of thought that may beguile.
So, love this time: let winter wait a while.

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by Desejo11/19/12

I like this, but the first stanza puzzles me. I like the rhyme, it's the content that I don't quite get. Here is what I am thinking:

Let winter wait a while: it can bide
its time, while you remembermore...

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by tazz31711/19/12

AS FAR AS WE KNOW

who can alter time and the seasons from happening. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh911/19/12

Sweeet Oblivion , when are the times you step out of ...

the pages of BDSM ..... non-consent Reluctance .....& write Poetry .....it is like the fables of the Legendary Phantom by Lee Falk ----" on certain nights it is rumoured the Phantom leaves the Deep Woodsmore...

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