Love's Garden

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missing those smiles.
from so long ago. watering
times shadow. simply slow, to
grow. bursting forth
blooms, radiantly happy.

bubbling within loves shiny
smile. oozing pure joy, upon
gardeners hand. soft gentle
touches to encourage
worthiness.

raining down
love, sweetly soft ....

smiling memories sinking
sensuously within. producing
all consuming honor from
loves open hand ...

nothing missing.

all is accounted for.
in this garden, planted
from the heart. inhaling
all scents of harmony.
peace and love ...

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice counter-point

to verse earlier read,

imparting feelings, describing feelings

but thankfully not speaking feelings names

thanks for the gift........

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
nothing missing

I see the garden. <grin>

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
lovely piece

Great descriptive writing

once again, you never forget

to describe how something

feels, looks or tastes,

I love that about your writing!

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
way to go,

babygirl! I told you you could do it... keep going cuz you're really starting to shine!!

just for fun, try some form stuff. you might surprise yourself!

Boo

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
soothing.......

and nice flow all the way through. nicely done.....don

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