- Erotic Poetry
- Maestro Winds
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Click herewaning moonlight
hangs on a nocturnal
skyscape
clouds blanket
pale changes in the
sea
everything is moving
in grey shadows
across harbor ridge bay
sounds of a distant
estuary faintly crooning
feathered ambience,
beacons her tapping
feet blurring the surface
of Sara's watery reflection
suddenly Sara's pristine seclusion
senses a sinister calm as
a howling timber wind
invades serenity
she dips her wings
into the Maestro and snatches
the beastly nyght
churning sea turns the color
of mud and
the tides devour
tempestuous gloom
of a starless night..
- COMMENTS
Tathagataover 18 years agowrite and some beautiful imagery.
~she dips her wings
into the Maestro and snatches
the beastly nyght~
I love the use of Maestro
Your poems are surreal in some ways, there isn't a clear story , but a mood and 3 or 4 images all tucked together that let the reader mix them and imagine.
you really have grown a lot as a poet.
it is very nice to see.
: )
quietpoetover 18 years agoof yours is getting better and better. This site has been good to you! Keep up the great, inspired writing!
QP
dcpoet44over 18 years agoof poe through this as i pick this out:
churning sea turns the color
of mud and
the tides devour
tempestuous gloom
of a starless night..
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always like work involving the darkness.....nicely done...don
