- Erotic Poetry
- Maritime Licks
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I want to live
by the ocean,
so that I can
lick the salt
off your skin,
feel sand on soles,
water on ankles,
bare rock behind,
bare you up front,
watch how sun
in a full horizon sky
paint jewels on your
mermaid torso rising
from a cool-off
in the sea
coming back
to me,
watch the breeze
mess up your hair
like I mess up
your composed
self control,
lose myself
to your hands
on a beach,
make you
lose yourself
to my hands
lips, and more,
a rhythm rocking,
rapture dream,
rowed clear,
drifting free,
...let seagulls watch.
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsover 20 years agoI read your Sig line, and thank god I did, what a hot hot hot poem, if I walked across this poem I would have burned the very soles of my feet, but I read it and burned the feet of my soul.
oh my
I liked that
:patting own self on back in giddy pleasure
Anonymousover 20 years agoI seem to be throwing fives around like confetti today.....and you, sir, are on a roll.
Tess
Rybkaover 20 years agoI do like this poem, but I would space it differently (what else is new). I think your opening would be much stronger if you didn't separate the conclusion of the thought and wrote it like:
"I want to live
by the ocean,
so that I can
lick the salt
off your skin."
To me, that is a great opening statement.
